This is fairly good minimalistic music. It reminds me of what I might hear if Phillip Glass or Steve Reich started using midi files to compose. I think the choice of bass drum really helped to cover the attack flaws of the guitar sample. Well done.

While this may not be my normal style of music, I can definitely appreciate that it works well for its purpose. It makes me want to get up and dance.

This is a very good start. While the basic outline you have created can act as a backdrop for these scenes, if you would like to truly portray the story in your music, I would recommend adding to your composition. For example, a battle is supposed to be taking place, yet I did not hear a single gunshot in your music; there is supposed to be shouting and chaos at points, however the music remained soft in dynamic and relatively smooth in character; also, I could not hear a difference between the various environments that the crew was supposed to be placed in. Essentially, while you captured the moods quite well overall, I do not think that you painted a clear picture with your music. This would be like looking through wax paper at a landscape and having to require someone to tell you that there is a tree five feet in front of you: you may know you are in a relaxing, beautiful environment, but you know nothing about it.